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Desire. (Poem)

Discussion in 'Arts' started by Tehman, Sep 26, 2009.

  1. Tehman

    Tehman [Heart o' Gold]

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    Tis a poem I wrote about a dream I had...


    Desire

    I close my eyes and fall asleep, after holding thoughts so veiled and deep.
    I wake up in an illusive land, with eternal beaches of golden sand.

    I see red skies and I feel warm winds, as I think of our love and not my sins.
    A path of footprints across the beach, I wonder to myself where they reach.

    I follow and follow till I come to a cove, the pattern continues like thread neatly wove.I stop, I look, behold your gorgeous face, so frail and delicate like soft silk lace.

    I take a deep breath and ponder your eyes; I stare into pure cuteness without any lies.
    I approach these eyes of growing trust, while warm winds waft a weakening gust.

    I touch your chin and caress your skin, the sun sets on the water and shines like tin. I continue the approach to express my desires, to touch your lips, to quench our fires.

    We kiss for hours as we whisper our thoughts, as we stand so close, like were tied in knots. Suddenly you smile and my face lights up...I now see what I truly desire.
     
  2. jamiejo

    jamiejo n00b

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    it is awesome :coolgleam:
    :thumb:
     
  3. Lana**

    Lana** n00b

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    Wonderful job Nick. :)
    How long did it take you to write it?
     
  4. Tehman

    Tehman [Heart o' Gold]

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    A couple of hours, kinda just sat and bed and wrote away for a while.
     
  5. [Truffles]

    [Truffles] Yum x]

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    Wow, that's talent!!


    This is honestly amazing! :)
     
  6. Lana**

    Lana** n00b

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    Wow! :) Great job!!
     
  7. racing boy

    racing boy Guest

    Great job!!
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  8. CokeHead89

    CokeHead89 another day in paradise

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    good job man...keep up the work
     
  9. xBunnii

    xBunnii The Cynical Bunny

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    Really good!
     
  10. Burning Fire

    Burning Fire Guest

    Nice work :thumb:
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  11. ! AngelicBody !

    ! AngelicBody ! Love.Live.Love.Laugh&Love

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    O-M-G. That is truly beautiful. You definatly have a talent for working
    with words and thoughts. The poem has so much depth to it. Just... Wow.
     
  12. Dark-Angel

    Dark-Angel Guest

    A dream? XD

    But seriously, you got talent. Awesomeness. ;P
     
  13. Angel of Game

    Angel of Game You want ban?

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    Very nice poem. Even it's kinda late reply but, eh... :p
     
  14. Eagle Eye

    Eagle Eye Guest

    Nice Nick. Who was the lucky girl? xD
     

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