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My Poetry.

Discussion in 'Arts' started by Grey Dreams, Jan 4, 2011.

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  1. Grey Dreams

    Grey Dreams Colorblind

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    I'm not a emo... I just happened to get dumped by my boyfriend when I wrote this.
    It hurts to hang on,
    But it hurts to let go.
    I’m constantly falling,
    down this endless hole.

    The pain you bring me,
    Every time you are near,
    Is taking its toll,
    On this fragile heart so dear.
     
  2. Red Succubus

    Red Succubus Arthas Fangirl.

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    Oh you poor girl... Thats why Lesbians are best. We would never hurt you like a man would.
     
  3. vougelove!!333

    vougelove!!333 n00b

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    well sh!t

    The world is f*cked... but not all guys break your heart and not all girls are the shiz either so just love yourself and love will find you
     
  4. iRawrYay

    iRawrYay n00b

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    You must be retarded, a breakup is a breakup. Regardless, if it be a guy, or a girl that's dumping you, it hurts. Stop being so fucking stupid.

    Anyways, I like the poem, cute, but it is pretty saddening. :3
     
  5. SC-Glider

    SC-Glider -

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    That was a smart statement. :) It's too bad it made no sense.. :thumb:
     
  6. Thomasan

    Thomasan n00b

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    I am not a Poet But I have some collection........

    [​IMG]
     
  7. ???=_=???

    ???=_=??? sometimes silly

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    Sounds like a poem id write, it reminds you that you will survive loss.
     
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  8. Sicu

    Sicu Here on Random Times

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    Why wouldn't someone survive loss?

    And your poetry is ok, I think. But what I knew is that a poetry should have a bit more rhyme....ah well, everyone has his own style.
     

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