I'm not a emo... I just happened to get dumped by my boyfriend when I wrote this. It hurts to hang on, But it hurts to let go. I’m constantly falling, down this endless hole. The pain you bring me, Every time you are near, Is taking its toll, On this fragile heart so dear.
well sh!t The world is f*cked... but not all guys break your heart and not all girls are the shiz either so just love yourself and love will find you
You must be retarded, a breakup is a breakup. Regardless, if it be a guy, or a girl that's dumping you, it hurts. Stop being so fucking stupid. Anyways, I like the poem, cute, but it is pretty saddening. :3
Why wouldn't someone survive loss? And your poetry is ok, I think. But what I knew is that a poetry should have a bit more rhyme....ah well, everyone has his own style.