I think they're pretty good, let me know what yall think. No remorse Ignore the pain its not even real the drugs you take the wounds that you feel you are no different there is no reason right now this is not the hurt season so put down your tool and pick yourself up or are you a fool worth nothing, used up everyone must fight their demons someday your destructions not right someday you'll pay the scars that are marked are laughibal errors you trapped yourself in unescapable snares so as they point and snicker at you you know its your fualt your the reason your screwed and now you see why you have failed success is gone that ship has set sail its as i just said the pain is not real the pleasure you take but you try to conceal take off your damn mask and open your eyes finaly figure out that there is an outside none of it is true your not so blind happyness was right there the whole damn time so now you know why i show you no pitty its because you were stupid you could have been happy instead you threw away all your hopes and dreams you replaced them all with black bruises and screams Enraged Anger and frustration locked in my cage it wont be much longer untill i unleash my rage upon what or whom i do not care punishable by death it begins with a glare the weights are my enemy my only vent they no longer appease me soon I'll regret if this goes on there will be an implosion ill be more devistating than any explosion I'm not confused only negative help i refuse I have an initiative the skellotons Ive hidden are yet undiscovered the secrets I wield never to be uncovered The sadist inside me it screams to cause ache this insatiable anger I'll make your world quake If you let me out I swear to you death I'll hurt you and others your skies wil burn red I hope you can fight because if you cant run I'll hunt you down and kill you for fun one thrust than two a dull blade runs through three thrusts than four one point to my score there is static in my mind where my demon resides it tried to overcome me it's mutilation is mine I am no puppet I am pure fire I'll burn you at glance Consume your desire Try to predict what happens next before I cut off your very next breath This rage I'm not the same What I've become Something insane I promise you anguish My anger, your pain one hundred years from now They'll remember my name Altha Lifters We are of Altha Top lifters with praise Our bodies the tools The sharpest of blades We charge through the reps One, five, then ten With just a moments rest We'll go at it again The bar it goes down There is a clinking of chains The bar it goes up A new max is obtained Our competition you shake We walk as you crawl Your lifts, we dominate We stand where you fall We're Altha the beast Heavyweight to 119 This is our creed We are one as a team I've written several more but Idk if i wanna post them.. lol Sorry to double post, but I decided to post another poem I wrote. If you want go ahead and merge the two posts together though. Vengeance Regardless of my trust You went behind my back You made up all these lies And you talked all this crap I hope you understand That if I get my way You'll eat all your words I'll violently make you pay Everything you've done In contrast with what you've said Your words, they are all lies Your actions true instead And now you hear me speak I say that you lie And for the words that you said I truely pray you die I consider you a traitor To all good morality The horrible things you did You have no integrity You once stood by my side I took you as a friend But you stabbed me in the back Consider that our end I wish to cause you grief So you wanted to start a war You've already lost You've slumped below the floor I swear I'll see you crawl It is now my obligation To watch you whither and burn Consumed in your own damnation.
This one is a little twisted, but again merge it if you think neccesary. Damned There you lay Sprawled out on the floor I regret pulling the trigger Now more and more But here we are Your life now drained The pool on my floor Dark red blood stains What should I do? I have not many choices Turn the gun on myself? Give in to the voices? The shattered glass Looking up at me It sees a monster Why do I breath? Echoing screams Run through my head Four small children Are now all dead The love of my life Expresionless now Quieter yet A hole in her brow A voice is heard From the outside Put your hands up Give in, do whats right My tears and my cries Fill the room I see the officer A click than a boom More blood now Rests on my hands What have I done? Is this who I am? I lose control A smirk then arises The gun to my mouth To end my disguises The trigger hits mark There is not a shot Instead a blank pop A bullet, there is not Again and again There is no round I long to hear The bang bang sound The swat team enters My blood bathe scene They raise up their arms And load their magazines They fire on me I finaly let go I'll soon fly Upon the wings of a crow
Unspeakable Warning: This one contains some pretty bad language so dont read on if you arent mature enough to read without freaking out. I want you to listen now... To what I'm about to say I swear to fucking god! Someday I'll MAKE you pay! The hurt you put on me The scars you made her bear... I'll reap you of your life! Leave your fucking corpse bear! You dont know who I am... But I know who you are You hurt the one I love Left her emotionally scarred Your mother should have known To kill you in your crib Because the day that I find you I'll make you Satan's bitch! The rage you put in me... It makes me a sleeper cell When I get my hands on you I'll send you straight to hell! If I find where you live I'll leave your house to fire Lay to rest your whole family My rage it just got higher I will clench your heart In my bloodied fists Look you in your eyes Cover your throat with slits Atleast if you had died With only father's sin Your soul would not be confined Instead head first to hell, you dove in What the fuck was on god's mind? When he bestowed your soul You comitted such a crime Your heart is black as coal I know why I was born It was to make you suffer I can never forgive you... The way you hurt my lover So listen to me good And hear my words well On the day that I find you I'll make you BEG for hell! The day may not be soon But I promise it will come You will stink of fear Just try to fucking run! I will hunt you down Find you one day It will be my lifes work Thats all I have to say
Merge this one with the last one if neccesary, again. Silence Some days are filled With anger and hate I'm so pissed off In my rage I sufficate It blinds me and binds me I do things I regret Sometimes I wish i wasnt here So everyone would forget I confuse those around me They try to understand Something they do not know I am a forsaken man I want to let it go Relieve myself of chains But nothing can help me now It's to late for me to change For to long I have gone Holding back all my words It toos its toll on me Causeing this pain and hurt Very soon now I will run out of luck A question I ask myself Do I even give a fuck? My fuse is shortest now Anything could set me off I'll blow up at a whim Something as simple as a caugh Rage is my undoing It's destroying my soul I've gone from bieng angelic To bieng as black as coal I wasnt this way once I used to be young with joy To say I was once happy Through my fingers it slipped away I want to say I'm sorry For writing all these words They sum up to nothing They should'nt even be heard Through silence, we are all deaf. If we are all deaf, our voices are not heard. If we do not speak, no one can make a difference. If nothing changes, we are doomed to repetition. Use your voice.
Two more poems I wrote today, comments? Thanks Falling The world it falls Into a pit People dont scream They cant see it Eyes are shut Mouths are open No one can hear The endless exposion Ignorance is bliss Yeah right, bull shit Nothing can stop A deterioration like this So lets hold hands And fall together Keep your eyes shut Lets scream forever The pain wont be fast It goes on quite long So lets continue Our screaming song We put our selves On this crash course You'd best buckle up We'll welcome your corpse It's time to pay Begin to crawl Watch your step to hell Its a long fall Beggining and End Insanity It cleanses all Try not to laugh As your angels fall Question their ideals Dictate your own Without a care at all Their blood will build your thrown Throw out your remorse Leave no room for pitty Exclude mercy and thrash weakness Your soul pure black and gritty With this your machine is built Of everything great and dark All to be added now Is the small pure hatred spark Ignite your raw emotion Begin your destined deed Dont forget your objective here To watch all burn and bleed Open this beast's eyes Show it's reason for being Once it gets the meaning It will stop their hearts from beating You can not turn it off Instanity cleanses all So go ahead and laugh As all once loved falls
They're actually really good. :Z Unlike some phags who phailsuperhardcore at poems. Yours seems to actually mean something. Awsum.
No friends of mine This must've been a test It came so close An explosion of anger Screaming fists thrown Something just happened From content to needing blood I almost blew the top All over a piece of crud? How can I feel This way with my friends? I wanted to hurt them all Emotional wounds never mend I felt just fine Nothing was wrong So how did my anger Become so strong? I'm afraid of this feeling Its not who I am Is a part of me sleeping? Is this in his plan? I wanted to threaten them They were so careless They know how I am My anger flows endless If it happens again There will be tears I wont be so kind I'll replenish their fears Friends or not I dont fucking care I'll break their bones Lets see if they dare An urge a nightmare Motherfucking rage It begins to set me free I'm starting to enjoy it My eyes they can now see I will tear you open Watch your mechanics I love to watch you bleed I am a hate fanatic In my way or not I'll run you down for fun I will break your ankles And laugh as you run The smile across my face Is not one of joy It is one of fury Your death it will employ Stay away from me If you want to breath If I get my chance Agony you will recieve Not only physical I will drive you mad Please burst into tears As I open up your dad Pain is my career And business is good I will treat your mother Just as I should I can scalp her nice Wood chips to her nails Hot pokers to her eyes An axe when all else fails Your brother will fall quick He will be a blast I'll light up all remains And burn them all to ash And then there you lay Broken and in pain You look to me and ask "Whats your fucking name?" But all I see is you Sprawled out on the ground I look at you with grin Then begin my ground pound I look in my mirror I think a job well done I laugh to myself "Tonight was full of fun" Fuck you You think your so smart? I see through your lies You cant hide from me Its clearly in your eyes I look to you for truth Your untue to me in turn If I find my right reason I'll set you ablaze to burn What kind of person are you To hold me in low regard? I give you everything But I've dealt my final card So lie to me again You ruthless hateful bitch I'm fed up with you You've taken my will to live Fuck you an your ways You are derived of respect In your own pit of misery You have fallen to neglect You will be sad tonight So cry yourself to sleep I am satisfied It gladdens me you wheep A hell There he sits Watching the clock The second hand moving Tick tock, tick tock Light by candle Contemplating all Into a trance The boy will fall The mind can race To far away places But instead he see's Deaths many faces A ping and a tap Rain on the roof His concentration stays yet It does not run aloof Snoring is heard From down the hall The trance is broken He glances around He looks to the clock Came an hourly sound The hand it struck three The young boy looks down The clock hits the floor The boy looks around The candle goes out Exit all sound The lad is scared now Fear in his mind 3:00A.M. he knows well It's significance, it's crime The doors first ajar Begin to slam shut A hissing is heard His fair cheeks are cut The storm rolls on Thunder is heard Lightning strikes His whimpering is slurred He runs to a door But it is shut tight He pounds on the frame With all of his might Scream as he may No one will come He claws at the wood As nail leaves thumb Everything stops Again he sits The clock on the wall The candle is lit He looks to the clock The minute hand moves It's 3 AM again? But it came oh so soon... Run and hide Your time will come to end I'll give you your thorn crown You think that your a martyr? Upon you they all look down I swear upon the clouds That kingdom in the sky By the time that I am done I'll watch you, feel you die So while I cast you up Upon you pentragram It's time you realise Your soul it has been damned His fury flows through me When your subject crosses my mind I swear on blood and bone Revenge it will be mine So enjoy it while you can That life you swindled away Because upon a pentagram With Satan you will play Soon I'll take your all Leave you nothing dear I'll find where you are Destroy your life with fear So go run and hide The monster is now confined It's chains may rust and carode But his teeth are sharp as knives You think you got away? 2 Years have come to pass Still a lifetime to go Someday I'll find your ass Five months I've held it in It's tearing me apart Someday I will kill you Bear handedly tear out your heart This is who I am Something dark and evil I'll never take it back Vengeance I must feel I swear to god Darek, when I find you, I'll kill you, your family, your dog, I'll take everything you love and more, you'll regret what you did before all is over with.
This is a poem I wrote for my girlfriend a few days ago, its different from the ones I've put up to this point so tell me what you think, lol. If you see something that doesnt seem to make any sense it's because it has a special significance to me and her, like 27 is our number, etc. Cherished I look into your eyes In you I see my heaven I think of all the times We drew our 27 I kiss your perfect lips I take in all the love Dont stop to take a breath I just cant get enough I see your brightened smile It fills me up with joy I think to myself I am such a lucky boy You take my hand in yours We begin to glow For the love you give I'll never let you go I hold you in my arms Then I gently squeeze I've loved you from the start For you I'm on my knees I hear your angelic voice It puts a smile on my face I cherish all you are Your love is my embrace Everytime we lay And hold eachother close My love for you it grows On you I overdose Every time we'd walk And gaze up at the sky Sitting at Tanner's spot Promising we'd never die So look me in the eyes Kiss my gentle lips Let me hold you in my arms We should cherish times like this Let me hear your pretty voice And see you gorgious smile For these simple things I've walked a million miles Take my hand in yours And walk with me tonight Later when we lay We'll hold eachother tight The happiness we share Brings joyous tears to my eyes I'll care untill my end True love it never dies.
A lost goodbye And now your gone My little sister I only wish I could have kissed her She had to go Off somewhere and die I didnt get To say goodbye Just like that A glimpse of time I took for granted When she was mine But now no more Will I hold her Never again Shes gone forever My precious baby Never, no more She upped and walked Out of life's door And here I sit Broken in pain She is gone now I cry in vain I love you, Snicks You kept me going When all else failed Only you, kept me going
Sweet Revenge You think your safe? that you are scott free? There is no haven for you Your corpse is set on me I will cripple you And let you see The many ways of torcher Planned for your family A blade to the scalp A hammer to the knee Blood on the floor Tracking where you flee I'll follow you Laugh as you cry Watch your eyes dialate As you die Lay down beside you Hear your last breath And watch as it enters My friend they call death Cut you undone Piece by piece Shit on your remains A disgrace at the least I'll keep your eyes leave them out to dry Carode your soul It was always a lie Hear me out now Your name it was drew Fore the time I am done I'll have killed you
my own When the moon is full and the trees are bare. Walk through the Cemetary if you dare. Where skeletons rot and corpses fester. Locate to the tomb with the skull of a Jester. Feed him a token all shiny and new. It is then that CarnEvil will return for YOU!
I may slip If you make me lose control I may cause you pain and grief But even if its your fault The blame gets put on me I end up bieng the one Who is put in the wrong Even though I wanted not To cause much pain for long Pushing me beyond my limit May not be a smart thing for you But still with every day The same things you do I can only take so much Before I lose my edge I dont like to cause hurt It goes against my pledge Within this self made hell Is a self mutilation With every tear you shed Further to my humiliation I swore not to hurt you A promise I try to keep But in sanity's absense Theres little more than bleak Sometimes I may slip And do something I regret But please do not remind me I'd rather try and forget I beat myself up Fighting on the inside Everytime I do The pain I cause is mine The ones I love must know Inside me what is hidden I do have my own demons Yet to have been ridden So in future times Please remember my words And dont push my limits Opening more hurt Do I want this? It happens to us all An end to a beggining It seems as though One of mine are finishing A record to be passed A few weeks from now A beggining to an end Added tears to my brow Right now in speculation But in truth it can be told It once felt brand new Nothing new is what I hold A distance has appeared A gap in attentions No longer a priority This raises many questions A thought now to be pondered Could this end be in vain? The possibility does exist That it would bring me great pain So for now it's just a thought Unsettled in my mind For the question that remains Should I still keep this mine? I was there for you I was there for you When your friends turned And said mean things When they hated and burned I was there for you When you needed a friend When no one would talk When you wanted it to end I was there for you When you had to move From your old home Stepping with you I was there for you When you cried about darrek Holding you closest Through your own darkness I was there for you When you had nothing No one to turn too Atleast I was something I kept you safe When they got perverse And tried to touch you In confusion you submersed I was there with you On long night walks Discussing our lives Back when we'd talked I listened to you When you spilt your life You told me your secrets Than I told you mine I was your armor When others threw stones I kept them at bay Away I was thrown I was your sword In your dark hour Time of desperation When others got sour I trusted in you I thought you would not Hurt me like this But I asked for a lot I said I was sorry It fell on deaf ears I must not be worth A friendship of years I care about you It hurts when you cut It hurts when you smoke We're stuck in a rut I'll wait for you Despite all these things I love you the most For all that you bring What is this? Again it will happen The fleet of the bad Retreat of whats good Entrance to sad In goodness's absense Will grow a seed It will bring with it Sadness's creed Once greatness falls Unto the below Forthecoming violence Will begin to show Soon there wont be Anymore nice It will be negative Absence of Christ I'll stand there With a blank stare Standing upon my mask Once more in a glare So say goodbye To your good feelings And try to hide From those ugly decievings Jealosy's root And suspiscions arise Hiding behind A cute disguise Two blue eyes Azure with intent But at what cost My own decent I'd really appreciate some feedback on these ones. They're recent.
Some Tips To Writing Poetry Some tips to writing poetry, They may not be worth a dime, You have to watch the rhythm, It's nice if it does rhyme. Don’t sit and think of universe, Just feel what's in your gut, Then write it down and read again And cut and cut and cut! Don’t contemplate the whys and woes, Just listen to your heart, And in its wisdom and with its beat, You can do your part. The grammar that you teacher taught Just put it down, aside. Then learn to jump, to flow, to surf, On your verbal tide. Don’t use words like "Require" When a simple "want" will do, And choose your words by rhythm, They'll fit you like a shoe. Don’t be afraid of idioms They are your help and aid, They'll cause a smile, some laughter too They're worth their weight in jade. Forget about what others think, You're writing for yourself, The dictionary and spelling books Leave safely on the shelf. Try writing when you want to laugh, Or when you want to cry, You'll see it flow, and gush, and pour, And burst into the sky.
Poem I wrote My secrets, my fears, my life The light shone on the walkway to my heart I let you in I shouldn't have, I shouldn't have You discover my secrets, my fears, my life I kick you out You expose my secrets, my fears, my life I put up shields to surround me To surround my secrets, my fears, my life Until one day I have none No secrets, no fears, no life None come to the funeral, they did not know They did not know of my secrets, my fears, my life It's about a person who starts to love someone, but then finds out that he's an jerk. She ends up to be a person who stays locked in their room. She dies alone, and nobody attended her funeral, because nobody knew she existed.
New Light An hour of darkness Has come to pass An end to and end Has come atlast An eclipse of emotion Has come into the light New rays of sunshine Shown into the night A new son has risen Another day has come Hope has returned I'm no longer numb A familure sensation Comes into my view Once long gone Now seemingly new This red hot ember Glimmering embrace Much missed warmth I've longed for the taste In two blue oceans I get lost everyday Tonight take my hand Help me find my way Wrote this some time ago but never added it to my laptop, just found the sheet of paper I wrote it on so I figured I'd put it here with everything else.
