ok ive been told im a poet can some one tell me what they think: in the devils lair we burn in hell the pain of it like a witches spell no matter how loud u holler or yell you'll never escape that firery hell
Eh it was all right for how short it was but make your poems longer and flow better and you could have something.
in the devils lair we burn in hell the pain of it like a witches spell no matter how loud u holler or yell you'll never escape that firery hell Howabout. In the devils lair we burn in hell The pain of it a witches spell NO matter when you holler or yell youll neve...ur doin it rong! Fail.
You guys are soooo mean. I find "holler" to be perfectly poetic language... Almost like that one poet, he was famous..
